Worldbuilding — Korín, Sorín, and Arín 2021-11-03

By Max Woerner Chase

I let things get kind of late, and there are some other things I want to work on, so I'm going to try taking some quick notes on things I could change in the poem.

Oof, I'm trying to figure out if this is more or less issues than I was expecting. Some of the punctuation problems kind of caught me off guard.

Anyway, I should wrap up for now. This initial pass is enough for now. Later, I'll write this down to turn it into a checklist.

For now, I've got other things I need to focus on.

Good night.