Worldbuilding — Korín, Sorín, and Arín 2021-10-28

By Max Woerner Chase

All right, there we go. I removed the comments from the draft, and formatted the draft based on my initial metrical analysis. I then added some custom CSS to fix how it rendered in the theme.

The next step from this is to do a few passes of revision on screen, then print it out (it's like 4 pages), and take notes on issues.

The main focus show be on improving the quality of the draft, but I also want to think some about presentation and work on writing up my notes for the rest of the setting document.

All right, I'd better get ready for bed.

Good night.