I've got a bit more feedback on one of the second drafts. While I work on figuring out how to act on that feedback, I'm looking over the other second draft, which is at least shorter. I just sent it over for feedback as well.
The feedback I want is around explaining what this project is, like, for.
Hopefully, I can get this all wrapped up in the next few days.
I had a bit of a rough day. I just want to get enough rest to finish this up, then get back to working on other things. (... and also, the next part...)
So, I'll wrap things up here, and take care of a few other things while this publishes.